Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Playing with Letters

This is not a real poem per say in that I know it is weak. I am playing with a concept right now and this is my first attempt. See, what I am going for is for the horizontal words to express a feeling that the vertical, capitol letters also conveys.

Feeling everything that you’re trying to say
Understand it less and less every single day
Caring is something you left far behind
Kindness, for you, just ain’t all that kind
You never relent in your endless assault
Only to say that it isn’t your fault
Understanding is something you sadly just lack
And never quite understand why I don’t want you back
So please just shut up and wander away
Stop with the notes and just leave here today
How long do you think you can keep this shit up?
Obviously you beleive I can't get enough
Leave me in peace so I can regain
Everything that I lost in exchange for fame

It is a celebrity looking at their fans. Sorry for the curse words =D


Roxan said...

I like it.

Scary Monster said...

Seriously, this be good fun.
Tenderness revealed in every line.
Only thing me wants to see.
More pictures of naked ladies!

Be...well, ya know.

Serena Joy said...

I like it, too.

ThatGreenyFlower said...

I think the insight is good.

Next time, try a longer one...like, "Fuck you and the horse you rode in on, asshole."

You up for the challenge?

Happy Halloween, Kan!!

Camille Alexa said...

Are you channeling Britney here?